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Task 2 : many people suggest that the best way to solve traffic congestion is to free public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that stopping charging on public transportation is one of the efficient way to release traffic jam at time. However, from my perspective, changing price of traffic transportation is not the most appropriate method to cope with social issues.

Buying free tickets of public transportation, to the extent, can release tense, severe and crowded traffic situation, but this kind of solution can not address all issues about traffic. Owing to lacking off effective management from the government to traffic, little knowledge about obeying traffic principles of pedestrians as well as drivers, and unreasonable order of roads, blocks and streets, a number of private cars have no place to drive but break traffic laws, which cause traffic congestion, either. But free transportation tickets can not tackle these issues. Furthermore, tickets price will directly influence the profit of public transportation companies. When citizens pay less money on tickets than before, the profit of companies would face an embarrassing circumstance. Thus, some experienced drivers might design and find other high-salary jobs, which would also cause social problems.

On the other hand, transportation tickets play a significant role on increasing social property. It costs a lot of money from the government to conduct the whole traffic system, in which transportation would be an irreplaceable section. The government should take back cost from the public by the means of tickets. Thus, quitting charging for them from citizens is an unreasonable requirement to the government. Moreover, public transportation produce a large amount of waste emission among a year. When tickets are free, more people would put taking public transportation as their first option, including students who used to walk to schools and commuters who used to take bicycle to work. Due to this factor, the government might set more buses for citizens, which is extremely harmful to our environment.

In conclusion, free charge for public transportation may partly help government decrease the number of traffic jam, but as I think that it might cause certain negative effects on the society we live in .


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发表于 2017-8-23 09:56 |显示全部楼层
你好同学,你的作文在暑期回馈学员的活动中被选中,由外教批改。
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