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The two maps gives the information of the present layout of the downtown area of a small city named Islip and the concept map of its future development.

Starting from the northern part of the city center, it can be seen that central town will expand drastically with the original shops on the northern section of the main road and parts of countryside disappear. In the future, shops will be gathered into the shopping center, in between the new bus station which is on the eastern side of the dual carriageway and the car park which is going to connect with the new residential section.

Notably, on the southern side of the original main road, shops will remain while the eastern part of the housing is going to be renewed and the southern part will be separated by the new build road. Parks will shrink for the Dual carriageway, yet it will remain its location which is next to the commutation road. To go even farther to the education region, only slight change can be spotted, with the school slightly expand its campus.

The most massive change is the commutation system, while the original main road will be only for pedestrians to use, new roads will be built in either northern and southern part of the downtown area. Noticeably, an up-to -date Dual carriageway will be built and roads will join together except for the short path that straightly lead to the New Housing area.

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对不起,老师,说错了,是剑雅12 的TEST6
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