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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.


Nowadays, many people argue that we should share as much knowledge as we know while others persist that some information with great importance shall not be shared freely. In my opinion, sharing knowledge is often beneficial for the development of the whole society, but we should be care of what we share.

Ancestor of humanity shared food, water and weapons with each other to protect themselves from brutal beast, famine and dangerous environment. It is hard for a single human to make a life in the natural world, but it is much easier for a group of people with well organization. Sharing things with others is a good habit, if inventors do not share their inventions, we will still live in an under-development world with no electricity and auto-mobile. Thank for the selfness sharing of every inventors which make all humanity live a better life than ever before. In children’s growing up process, their parents and teachers always share knowledge with them; this action is the fundamental of the civil society.

However, everything has pros and cons, sharing include. Weapons can be used by police and army to defend citizen’s life and property, otherwise law-offenders use guns to commit crime. Therefore, before we share important and valuable information to others, we should figure out whether they would use this information in a proper way, otherwise it may result in making damage to innocent’s property and lives.

In conclusion, it is kind and benevolent for one person to share his idea and creation to others; but most important thing is, we should make sure the man or group we share our knowledge with will use it to make the world better, thus, we can minimize the disadvantage of sharing.



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