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本帖最后由 Jacky777 于 2017-8-26 21:14 编辑

题目:At the present time, the population of somecountries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with thenumber of older people.
Do theadvantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

The number of young adults becomes larger than that of older people. This demographic change,in my opinion, will have a significant impact on our societies with positiveand negative outcomes.

The obviouslyadvantage of the larger number of young adults is that it can lead to a fastpace in the workplace. Unlike the elderly, young people are more likely tocomplete their work in a short term with high quality, which has a directinfluence on the efficiency of their companies. They can also adoptcutting-edged technology easily, which not only help them to improve their jobskills, but also enable them to contribute more to the company’s efficiency.This means that the productivity of the whole society will benefit from thischange.

Anotherpositive effect is that the invention and innovation of society will bepromoted as more well-educated young adults can come up with more ideas thatmay change our ways of living lives and completing work. It is widely knownthat young people are more creative and energetic than the older generation.Their creativity, imagination, passion and the ability to absorb informationhelp them to invent new products or come up with innovative ideas, which isimportant to improvements in technologies.

There is,however, a disadvantage. Since young adults need to build up their families andimprove their performance in the workplace, their demand for housing andeducation would be larger than older people, which will impose a burden on thegovernment budget. In this case, governments should pour more money in buildinghouses and schools, providing more opportunities of vocational training, so asto make the most of the creativity and wisdom of the young.

In conclusion,an increasing number of young people will bring more beneficial effects,although it also increases the costs of housing and education.

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