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Write about the following topic:Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices oneveryday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words. 


Nowadays, decisions about children has triggered fierce concern.People are involved in the discussion about whether allowing them to make their own decisions.As for me, I am in favor of permitting them to decide themselves issues.
Some individuals claim that it is crucial for children to make choices on matters that influence them.The main advantage of making their own decisions is that they could be more independent  by considering many aspects issues comprehensively.For instance, if a litte child have a fixed money, they are likely to think about saving money, spending money effectively and even it may raise their awareness of hardness and bitterness of life. Moreover, they are expected to become mature in some degree. Children will pay attention to others but themself and they will realize the responsibility which they should shoulder.
By contrast, the others believed that folks cannot enable children to choose their own matters such as food,clother and entermainment because of their immature minds.People have rights to supervsie children and lead them to a pretty way. If there are not any regulation on kids, they will be misleaded by bad informations and they are predicted to do something horrible.Besides a minority of limitation of life can work on them and make them to be helpful and care about others.
To sum up, making their own decisions is as important as, if not more important than,setting some constraint on them. If people can maintain the balance of these two issues, children will grow up healthily.


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