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Write about the following topic:Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices oneveryday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words. 


How to teach children is always a hot topic. Nowadays, people can not reach a consensus over whether they should let children make decision by themselves. In my opinion, it is imperative for children to decide matters affect them.

On the one hand, there are some people asserting that it is too permissive to allow them to make choices on daily matters, concerning that would be too selfish to care about others' feeling. To be specific, in the condition that both a little girl and her friend want the same toy, out of personal desire, it is impossible for her to give up toys for the other one, which is too selfish. Secondly, children do not tend to think of the economic condition without remind from parents, leading they to be extravagant. They would take it for granted spending money, regardless of their parent's feeling.

On the other hand, there are still some people do not believe the negative effect, insisting on letting children make up their minds. They reckon that making their own decision would help them build confidence. For example, if in a family travel, in which the plan would always been made by parents, adults invite their children to be one of the decision makers, children usually show much enthusiasm and confidence to do it. In the next period of their life, they tend to trust themselves to take on more responsibility, which is a process of self-confidence making. In addition, as for the problem that children do not own how to make a reasonable decision, it is believed that they can learn a lesson from terrible result caused by their selfish choice, and gradually learn how to consider the issue from someone else's point of view, which is a precious growth process in their life.

In conclusion, considering the merits elaborated above, there is no need to worry about the children's performance in decision making, which is just a process of growth.



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