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题目:"The most effective way to communicate an idea or value to large groups of people is through the use of images, not language."

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

作文:It is universally acknowledged that we have to exchange ideas with each other when we work in a group to finish some task. But it always afflicts about how to best convey our own thoughts to our teammates. Of course, there are many ways for us to choose. However, whether we should communicate an idea by images or by language are brought into debates nowadays.
I have to admit that language can help us explain an issue so that others can understand it. For example, if you want to explain a jargon in a new scientific domain which others may be unfamiliar with, youll have to use the specific words to help explain it. Nevertheless, language can be misleading sometimes, for the words you use to explain an issue can be personal, that is to say, you may interpret the issue as well as convey your own emotion on the issue to your group members. For, example, if you decide to eat outside and try to choose a restaurant. You may ask for suggestions from your friends,or you may search the information on the internet. The information you get are all personal, especially the advice from your friends, and you may even effected by the emotion from yours friends and begin to prefer or dislike a restaurant without having a try by yourself. Accordingly, although language can help to communicate our ideas with others, it can also carry some personal emotions, which can be misleading sometimes.
Then how about the images? Now that the language can be misleading, maybe the image can be objective. Of course, images are not able to convey our own emotions, so they can help us to explain the jargon easier, and they can also help us to illustrate the ideas we convey by our words. For example, when a teacher try to explain a specific kind of plant to his students. He may convey the characters of plant to the students. For example, the smell, color, or the shape of its leaves, it cant be neglected that all these characters are difficult to be understood only by words of the students are lack of imagination. So it is time for us to use the images to help illustrate the plant. By watching a picture of a plant can help us better understand it instead of only by reading its characters.
When confronted with the problem to communicate the ideas in social, we should combine the images and the language. The images without the language can be too inane, language without images can also be too personal. So, we should coordinate them to help us best communicate our ideas in a group work.

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