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发表于 2017-9-14 01:30 |显示全部楼层
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The graph and table below show data about global water use by sector over a span of 100 years (from 1900 to 2000) as well as water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.


Overall, it is clear than data of global water use increased sharply in the recent 100 years. Moreover, data of water consumption per person in Brazil was much higher than that of water consumption per person in Congo.


According to graph, data of global water use by agriculture rose dramatically from about 500 km3 in 1900 to over 3000 km3 in 2000. Meanwhile, there was a gradual increase in industrial use and domestic use in the same period. However, the growth rate of domestic use was not as fast as that of industrial use. Specifically, data of industrial use went up from 0 to around 1000 km3 during the latest 100 years and it always remained in the 2nd place.


As can be seen from the table, both population and irrigated land in Brazil were larger than that in Congo. Therefore, data of water consumption per person in Brazil was almost 40 times higher than that of water consumption per person in Congo, representing 359 m3 and 8 m3 respectively.


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发表于 2017-9-14 01:34 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2017-9-22 13:44 |显示全部楼层
有老师帮忙批改下吗????
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