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You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermaket.
Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter

- say who you are
- give details about the accident
- suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents.
150 words, Begain letter with "Dear Sir or Madam",

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Katniss Jin, and I am here writing to you because of a minor accident where happened inside the supermaket.
Last Friday I was really realxed hang out on the clothes store of the supermarket, their was a pants I really adore. So I decided to fit it and see if it suitable for me or not. Then I went the fitting room. However, when I putted all my bags on the wall and started taken off my shoses and pants, I didn't stand stainable because their wasn't any chair. Obviously, I left one of my elbows on the minor. But there had nothing behind the minor just air, and I fallen down with the minor on the floor in the end. The breaks of the minor didn't hurtted my face, but my elbows and my knees still bleeding a lot. It is dangrous if the minor stand in a space without stuff to suport.
o avoid my tragedy happen again, I highly recommend the fitting room minor should stick to a wall. And set a chair to help people fitting them more comfortable.
Sincerely,
Katniss Jin

谁念,谁念,道阻且长。
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发表于 2017-10-4 10:37 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2017-10-13 00:51 | 小站社区iPhone客户端

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Thanks for correcting me.
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发表于 2017-10-13 20:09 |显示全部楼层
一定要看看,最关键的地方
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希望从老师批改中学习
Nothing good comes from worrying.
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发表于 2017-10-14 16:39 |显示全部楼层
希望从老师的批改中学习。
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