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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.


The issue of whether sharing a most relative information in sensitive fields has been widely debated in our community recently. It is an important issue, as it concerns the laws of intellectual property and freedom of speech. A variety of different argument has been put forward about this issue.

It has been argued that freedom of speech should be limited. That is to say, if some information gets involved with sensitive fields, it should be forbidden to share. This position goes on to assert that, national security or some a most important information overweight the freedom of expression.

However, as Voltaire states, “I do not agree with what you have to say, but I’ll defend death to the death your right to say it”. Indeed, freedom of speech is universally solemn rights given by Charter of United Nations and the Constitutional Laws. If freedom of speech was threatened, it could be the devastatingly horrible world. In the past, black people were designated as slaves; today, black people can be selected as the President of the United States of the America. It is not an exaggeration to say that, minorities could not be treated equally without the freedom of speech. After all, freedom of expression is the first step for a spectacular achievement.

In my opinion, sharing information regarding sensitive parts should be slightly restrained. Sharing crucial information to the government is a way of damaging the country. It is being deciphered as  “Treason ” in some countries. In addition, some important information may violate others’ intellectual properties. For instance, if Apple’s core technology and information had not been protected, there would be some companies named  “Strawberry” or “Orange” using the same cutting-edge technology, consequently stirring up the market. Therefore, sharing important information should be abiding the laws and benefiting to the country.

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