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Question:<p>Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea?</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>
Many companies sell products or services but at the same time cause environmental
damage. Someone said it can be stop by ask them to pay penalty, such as a higher tax
when they cause the environmental damage. Others said there are better ways to stop
them from harming environment. What do you think is the best way to prevent the
environment from deteriorating?


With the progress in modern society and economy, our environment has been destroyed by factories that dump the poisonous wasterwater and other toxic chemicals. Some people are inclined to penalize these illegal factories by setting a high tax. They assume that the tax revenue could be used to protect our environment. However, depending on personal experience and private preference, I believe that taxing is not the best way to tackle the problem. I will try to illustrate my point in detail as follows.

To begin with, one of the best way to prevent these companyies from polluating the environment is shutting up them. The government could legislate and impelement specific regualtions and policies, which contain laws that these factories will be complusarily shutted up if they continue deteriorating the environment. For example, in my hometown, there was a factory intentionally releasing lots of noxious chemicals, and they got a large number of profits through these process. Undoubtedly, the factory ended up with close.

Second, another mean to keep these companies from damaging our environment is calling for the public\\\'s attention. It means that letting citizens know that these factories are environmentally unfriendly. the public will not purchase the products or services from these companies. Utimately, these factories will bankrupt, and they will not keep on polluating the environment any more. This measure is useful in my contries because people are more aware of their living surroundings than even before.

Admittedly, I am not saying that punishing the companies that polluate our environment is a bad idea, but if these companies find it lucrative even after offering the tax, this specific measure would be useless.

To sum up, from the above-mentioned discussion, the deduction may be safely drawn that setting a higher tax is not a good approach to address the environmental pollution problem, and there are at least two ways more effective.  




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举例说明可以这样简短吗
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