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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.


The issue of whether or not in certain countries, it is requisite tospend a great deal amount of money on building new railway lines for expresstrains between cities, has sparked off an intense debate. Some people arguethat enhancing existing public transport, like long-distance buses, is highlyurgent, while others claim that constructing brand new railway lines isconducive to ameliorating the efficiency. In my opinion, only by investing ondeveloping fast trains can the problem of road congestion and overwhelming populationbe addressed.


It is widely believed that travelling by coach has gained itspopularity throughout the world. This is simply because this kind oftransportation is affordable by most people. For instance, the long-distancebuses in Turkey only cost you within 15 dollars, no matter how far you aretravelling to. That is exactly why there are various companies running an arrayof bus lines between lines, and almost all of them are universally rated above8.5 out of 10. Therefore, apparently, the public is going to be the majorbeneficiary of the long-distance buses with acceptable price and enjoyableexperience, if the government spends large sums of money on this existing modeof transportation.


However, it is also manifest that constructing new railways forexpress trains can definitely extricate people from traffic jam. This isattributed to the mechanism of how trains work, which is not in need of highwayscausing appalling road congestion. In addition, trains are able to fulfillgreat capacities, solving the problem of overloaded population in certaincountries. A convincing example is China, because it has been investing on avast number of railway lines for very fast trains, turning out to be a greatimprovement on the convenience to people’s lives. Hence, it is by no means anunwise choice for some countries to simulate China, constructing a betterpublic transportation.


To conclude, I concede that taking coaches saves you tons of money.Nonetheless, in the contemporary society, enhancing the efficiency is much moresignificant, which is why it is absolutely requisite to spend plenty of money onbuilding new railway lines for express trains.


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发表于 2017-12-8 18:40 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2017-12-10 22:08 |显示全部楼层

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发表于 2017-12-26 17:46 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2017-12-31 22:20 |显示全部楼层
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