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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.


Two maps separately show the centre of a  town called Islip current development condition and future projection.
  Currently, there is a main road  through the town, from the west to east. And various shops  are on the both side of roads. Beisdes, at the end of a path located a school which enjoys a small area. The housing area  is surrounded by shops ,park and school .
  Looking at the second map in detail, the obvious change is the town are planned to be build into more functional areas and surronded by dual carriageway. At the northern part of the Islip, bus station,shopping centre and car park are arranged  in order.Moreover, among the city centre there will only pedestrians rather than roads.
The new housing areas will be put in the two sides of the pedestrians. And as for the education area which will be reloacted to the outside of dual carriageway.


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