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发表于 2018-1-1 17:00 |显示全部楼层
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


I suggest that children should learn how to manage their own money at young age. This is a good way to have a good habit which children can know how to use money no wast and also a good experience for children's growth, for the following reasons:

Firstly, teaching children to manage their own money can give them a clear cognize to money.And this will help them to realize the importance of money and can also develop the sensitive about the commerce or economy when they are adults they will also more sensitive to economy than others.One day, my mother gave me 100 yuan and told that they a all the money available for a month, I did not really know how many things that I can buy, so I wast them for toys and foods.

Secondly, to learn how to administrate can also teach children how to administrate themselves——to know how to administrate your money, you can also know how to administrate your time——they still have some thing similar.Although a children, but while he or she can control these, he or she will be success in the personality when he or she is adult.

Thirdly, to know to manage their money can teaches children how to increase their fortune. While I was a primary school student, my classmate were already know how to buy and sold game card to gain extra money. I used to admire at their smart, but even know I still can not understand how they earn money such easy.

To conclude, I strongly recommend that parent should teach children how to manage their money to practice their skills for their future, and also can gain a good habit to cut their coats according their clothes.


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