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发表于 2018-1-3 12:02 |显示全部楼层
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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic: Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?What other measures do you think might be effective? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.You should write at least 250 words.


Whenever the problem on growing traffic and pollution rises, the solution rose along.  People would suggest that the escalation of petrol price could solve the two problems at once. I agree, and I will provide some other aspects on it.
The angle of rise the price of oil could associate with lowering the chances of people willing to drive at a higher cost. Also, if the oil price continues to grow, yet more and more electric cars, as well as solar-based automobiles coming to the market, people would chose, or at least pause a while when it comes buy new cars or not. In this way, pollution could get controlled.
However, as the opinion just mentioned on pollution control, if it's due to people could have more options when buying a car considering the cost-effect situation involving the chance to buy an electric car, the growing traffic shall still be unresolved.
Thus, in my opinion, petrol price is only one variable among many others when it comes to traffic control. For example, population and urbanization play a huge role there.  It's due to migration or immigration, cities become cosmopolitan, highly urbanized than ever before. But urbanization itself contains the growing traffic problem itself due to rising population and city expansion.
On the other hand, based on my observations, I suggest we could build bridges above the main roads, and create a less crowded traffic scene vertically. Also, we could use the help of the government to restrict some of the free parking spots on the side road to create an extra line for cars to run instead of parking.
In conclusion,  I think to increase the petrol price is a brilliant idea for solving the existing problems, however, many other solutions would work along this one, so the issues could be solved more efficiently and effectively.



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