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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.


The two charts illustrate the future movement of UK graduate and postgraduate after finish their study in 2008. Apart from doing full -time work, many of them chose to do a part-time work, voluntary work or do further study, and unfortunately some of them were unemployed.

Doing further study took the biggest proportion in the destination of UK graduates in 2008 with the amount of 29,665 student. However, the number of students who were doing part-time job and unemployed were surprisingly quite close which were 17,735 and 16,235 respectively.

In terms of UK postgraduates, although the majority of them still opted to do further study, the proportion of students doing part-time work was much higher compared with UK graduates at the same year. Meanwhile, for those who were unemployed or doing voluntary work stayed at the same scale.

To sum up, no matter UK graduates or postgraduates, both of these two groups of students tended to choose taking further study as their first choice, on the contrary, doing voluntary work was their last option. Furthermore, students with higher level of education can find part time work more easily than normal graduates.


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