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发表于 2018-1-6 22:26 |显示全部楼层
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Task2:
In some cities, planners tend to arrangeshops, schools, offices and homes in special areas and separated them from eachother. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Answer:
With the expansion of modern cities, many planners call for that the cities should be separated for special funtions in various areas. In my view, it will be more helpful to individuals and our society over its downsides.

For individuals, the proper separation of cities makes people have a simpler life. Citizens can save more time and energy in finding their destinations. For example, some people may have to refer to yellow pages or maps to look for a hardware store in the old days. But now, they just need to go to a special area in their cities where provides almost all kinds of tools they need. Thus, the lives of citizens will become more convenient than ever before.

In addition, the business world will be positively affected by the proper separation of cities’ areas. The combination of campanies and shops in a certain place will increase the competitions between them, resulting that they have to provide better sevices and upgrade their products in order to survive in fiercer markets. And the continual competitions in the business world will eventually promote the development of social economy. Obviously, a properly gathered business center will benefit to the development of themselves and social economy.

It is true that the arrangement may increase the pressure on the public transportation connecting every district. Yet, it will not be the case with the advancement in technology someday. Therefore, the advantages in clear-defined functional areas on individuals lives and the development of business are outweigh its negligible disadvantages.

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