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 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.


    The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different ages doing regular physical activities in 2010.
    There was a steadily climbing from 47.7% to 53.3% between 15 and 54 years old Australian men . However, after peaking at the percentage of 53.3, the percentage had fallen to 47.1% which lower than from 15 to 24 years old men. Meanwhile, it shows a different trend that the percentage of Australian women  who did regular physical activities in 2010.
From 15 to 44 years old women, the percentage remained reducing , until reaching the bottom at 39.5%. After that , it started dramatical increasing from 44 to over 65 years old Australian women. In addition to the age group from 15 to 24, the percentage of women always lower than men who did regular physical activities . In particular, the discrepancy between men and women is most obvious in 35 to 44 age group.
    To sum up , the regular physical activities are more popular in Australian men . At the same time , the women also should strengthen their body exercise.
     


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发表于 2018-2-17 21:45 |显示全部楼层
Omar~Omar 发表于 2018-2-14 19:46
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