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Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Movies and televisions havemore negative influences than positiveinfluences on young people's behavior.
People get information from the media.Someone argue that the movies and televisions have severely negative influenceson young people’s behavior. Indeed, several decades ago, a psychologicalresearch showed that young people who watched violent movies were moreaggressive than the ones who did not. However, from my perspective, it is notthe fault of the media. Young people should be cultivated the ability to tellright from wrong, and the adult and government are on the mission to supervisethem.

First and foremost, movies and televisionsas the media formats should contain the art value and social impact. The plotof them could convey the emotion and value to the audience. It is thecomparison between peace and war, sorrow and pleasure highlight the importanceof the positive one. Therefore, under such conditions, it is imperative tocultivate young people to tell right from wrong. They are supposed tounderstand that, to some extent, the movies and programs on televisions arejust a kind of reflection of the society. We cannot deny that the society issophisticated and double-sided. Young people should have the capability to becritical toward movies and televisions as well as the society. Therefore,watching the movies and televisions with critical thinking, young people couldbenefit from the media.

In addition, it is the inescapable obligationon the part of the adult to supervise the young people. The supervisionresembles the concrete frame of the architecture of young people’s development.Without the supervision the building would collapse. Parents should restrictthe type of movie and television program watched by young people according tothe instruction of experts. The movies or programs which are not suitable foryoung people should be isolated from them. In addition, it is quite importantto tell the young that the real world and the representation in movie orprogram on television are disparate.

Last but not least, the government is alsoon the mission to supervise the media. The regulation should be made to siftthrough the movies and programs for citizens. Besides the government shouldrank the movies and programs for different age group of people. Thus, the roleof government is of vital importance.

To sum up, it is the media that shows thewonderful world. As long as young people watch the movie and television programswith a critical thinking, and the adult and government shoulder theresponsibility to supervise the young people and media materials, young peoplecould benefit from it a lot.

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