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发表于 2018-1-8 22:48 |显示全部楼层
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Task2:
Students in university should be specialized in one subject rather than to develop a wider range of many different subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.




Answer:
In recent years, more students prefer to have a minor subject in addition to their major during their university stage. People cannot help wandering whether students should focus on one subject or study several subjects at the same time is better for students. To my point of view, having more than one subject will have more benefits.


It is noticeable that studying other subjects can be a good way to develop their interests in learning and encourage them to study. For example, many students are forced to select their majors as their parents’ command or career requirements. If they have a chance to learn what they really like, they would be willing to make their own choices to obtain these extra knowledge. By learning these minors, it is possible for them to feel satisfied with study, then achieving better academic performance. Therefore, students may be more confident in learning and get a sense of achievement. Obviously, learning a range of subjects is helpful to personal development.


With the development of society, there is an incresingly desire of talents with experience in different fields. To stand out in fiercer job market, students should prepare well by having a minor subject to improve their capabilities. In other words, through learning in various fields, students may easily come up with novel ideas to solve thorny difficulties so that they are more likely to be promoted. In contrast, these job-hunters specializing in one subject may be inferior to their counterparts in problem-solving abilities. Thus, it is doubtless that having more subjects will be beneficial for people’s careers.


In conclusion, the positive effects of having another subject are so significant on students’ personal development and their careers. I find it hard to agree with that it will be better to specialize in one major in university.


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