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The diagram reveals the breakdown of different age groups of male and female Australian in 2010, meanwhile illustrating how much the people who live active lives account for in each age group.
By looking at the grey bars, the ones correspond to the male, we could be informed that the 15-to 24-year-old group and the group of senior citizens over 65 years old have the most people who do daily workouts, taking up 52.8% and 46.7% respectively. What’s more? It seems that the middle-aged man between 35 and 44 years old are the least willing to do sports, since there are only 39.5% of them performing regular physical activities.
Let’s now observe the dark bars, which are regarding the female. As is exactly contrary to the men, there are the fewest people whose lives involve daily exercises among the teenager girls and the elderly women, occupying 47.7% and 47.1% of the population in the relevant groups. Nevertheless, over half of the 45- to 54-year-old women are used to doing sports, since the percentage is 53.3%, the highest among these 6 groups, which is closely followed by the proportion of the sports lovers in the group of 55 to 64 years old and 35 to 44 years old: 53% and 52.5%.
In conclusion, the adolescent boys and the senior male are more willing to exercise regularly than the middle-aged men are, while the teenager girls and the elderly ladies are less interested in doing physical activities regularly than the young and adult ones.

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