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 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.


This bar chart tells about the data about Australians at different ages doing physical exercise regularly in 2010.

It was clearly that males and females have the close percentage for each age groups.But for 15 to 24,men doing regular exercise were more than women, showing differences between 52.8% and 47.7%. For the last 4 age groups the percentages of women was always higher in contrast wiith men. In addition, the most energetic age group for men was 15 to 24, reaching a peak at 52.8%, and for women, it was about 53.3% at age of 45 to 54. Furthermore,the data showed that it was a rising trend for women doing exercises with their ages growing up until they were over 65. As for men,the date fluctuated with their ages but almost raised same as their ages.

It was distinct to tell that alomst half of Australians do regular physical exercise no matter how old they were.Above all, it was a trend upwards to their ages and reached a stable stage when they were over 65.


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Isla_97  Thank you very much! I will keep working on it.  详情 回复 发表于 2018-1-13 19:52
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Thank you very much!
I will keep working on it.
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