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Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific point made in the reading passage.


The reading and the lecture discuss the story of the burning mirror is just a myth and the Greeks of  Syracuse never rally built such a device. The lecture puts forward three point contradicts the opinions of the reading.

First of all, the reading says that the technology for manufacturing a large sheet of copper with such specifications did not exist in the ancient world. in the contrast, the lecture claims that they can exist in the ancient world. By this way, the lecture contradicts the first opinion of the reading.

Second, the reading claims that it is unlikely that Roman ships stayed perfectly still for that much time, Such a weapon would therefore have been very impractical and ineffective. While according to the lecture, this is not the case. The lecturer says it is likely that Roman ships stayed perfectly still for that much time, Such a weapon would therefore have been very impractical and ineffective. By casting doubt on important piece of evidence of the reading. The lecture contradicts the second claim of the reading.

Finally, the reading states the Greeks had no reason to build a weapon like a burning mirror. While the lecture claims that Greeks had reason to build a weapon like a burning mirror. The lecture refutes the finally state of the reading.


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