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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words


The two pictures below depict that people in england consume electricity on specially days(such as winter and summer) and what they use it for which purposes.

In the graph, electricity is used by dewellings in England  more in winter than summer. The consume of electrity is floating in each day, and  about  average 40000 units in winter compared to 16000 units in summer. Besides, the least demand for electricity time is 7 hours in winter; while more demanding is about 22 hours.

In the pie chart, it exhibits that telectricity is spent for what purpose and its proporation by each family. Among of these, heating rooms and water prodominate the most part, accounting for 52.5%.  The percentage of Lighting, TV and radio use is as same as spenting on vaccuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools; they are all 15%.

In a brief short, electrity is consumed much more in winter than summer in england and a large amount of families spent it on heating systems.


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