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Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how the proposal discussed in the lecture would solve the specific challenges described in the reading passage.


There are some parents who prefer to reward their kids with money for their excellent academic performances.Although it might seem to be a motivator,but I do not consider it  apporiate.
Initially,parents should not relate their kids's grade to money.Dose a child who can not reach a high mark deserve no money?The answer absolutely lays no.No children should  worry about money.For instance,a kid unfortunately get  badly sick will unavoidably fail to perform his normal level academically which results low mark.If money are related to his grade,more pychological stress will push to him and lead him to further failure.Also school-age children have different ability to study during their different age,it is unfair to force someone who intellegently develop slow to make good mark.

Furthermore,children do not have the ability to properly handle those extra money.They may spend it on video games,playing it all night long.Or buy some ciggarates and acohol.For a child their main task is to develop their personality and skill.Too much stress on school mark is not conductive for their general development.

Finaly,if you let a child possesse too much moeny it will be a risk.Because there are vulnerable to thives and bad man.

In conclusion,considering the potential problems resulted by this money rewarding.We should not do so.I believe kind words or a delectable meal with them would just be much wiser.





Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea?


First,the professor suggested a flooding station on the planet in 15km off the surface which will solve the atmospheric problem the passage has mentioned.Because up in the height of 15km the atmospheric pressure there would be just as normal as in that of the Earth.By this way,the crushing of the spacecraft or anything humans could be aoid.
Second,the passage concerned about the shortage of water on Venus.There is no water reservoirs on its surface.And in its atmosphere the rarity of oxygen of water vapor made it impossible not to supply water from Earth to Venus.However,the professor pointed out a proposal which sharply contradicts this point of view.Suggested we could use carbon di-oxide and sulfide obtained from Venus surface to produce water.
Third,from this passage we learned that sunlight is insufficient on the planet's surface.Only 40% of the sunlight can pass the clouds existed in the atmosphere.Also below the clouds there are a think layer of carbon dioxide,which means the sunlight would be blocked even more here,therefore fewer sunlight will get the surface of Venus.Without enough sunlight,sufficient power supply could only be a fable.The professor used the reflection of the clouds to generate power to solve this problem.In addition,he pointed out that the clouds are not that dense as the passage said.


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