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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic: Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.You should write at least 250 words.


It is true that some excellent athletes get much higher income than professional people who are in other fields. People hold differing views regard to this phenomenon. Although top-level sports can earn a large amount of money easily, I would argue that they may pay the price for these achievements.

The large salary gap between sportsmen and ordinary people is not fair to the public to some extent. Firstly, every vacation is a essential part of the society and every worker can make contribution to the society, however, they get different feedback through their effort. For example, some mental workers play an crucial role in the development of technology and science, but they are just in the middle class rather than getting high salary. By contrast, some athletes can get payment from endorsing products and attending commercial activities.

Despite the above arguments, I believe that they have their own bitterns which are unknown to the public. Almost athletes have got training since they are in very young ages, so they cannot experience the childhood like others. Actually, many sportsman would get injured when they are training or in competition, even their pain may not be complete healed the whole life. Moreover,
they are represent their nation in match and bear the public’s expectation, which brings too much mental stress. They are not under the physical but also psychological pressure.

In conclusion, it seems to me that everyone have to make the efforts to get reputation and  fortune including celebrities such as sportsmen.


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