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Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the reading passage.


I totally disagree with this statement. everything has double sides. movies and television could effect the young both negetively and positively.

As the medias that could transfer information to people, they might turn to dark when they spread something unregular, or sicky. Some movies or teletions, full of violence and blood,shouting to people how exacting to kill somebody,how facinating when fired one's home, all the screen maintain evil and twisted. and teenagers with unmature mind will be effected by those pictures and learn from it, which is harmful not only for themselves but only the whole society. At this time, televion and movie just like devils for the youngs.All we can do is teaching ,telling them what part is incorrect for being human and why, taking them away from these terrable screen.
Also, changing teenagers' habitet and making them lazy is the one of negative parts for those midia. I've seen lots of young persons spending all time on games and entertainment channel without doing their assignments.Same as taking drugs, they are losing their passion and energy to work,study and life, and getting annoying being opmatic.

But everything has their double sides.Movie and television would make positive effects to the youngs.

We know that our first class to the world is obtained from them. Our parents teach us lots of knowledge by movie or television when we barely know words. the picture on the screen is easy to remember and learn fast. it is our first educational place.






Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


The article illustrate elephents' behavior by giving three different points,which are listed on the following,showing that elephents are very facinating.But professor in the lecture give her disagreements to these.

First,the reason why elepents are aware of approching to death is not refer to the water in which they would like to die alone.As professor said, elephents' teeth are not strong anymore. so they need to find some sort food, vegetations,for example,which located in somewhere with or near water,for better chewing, not because of the awaring of death.

Second, elephents can be training by touch their sensitive ears, requring them to remember and repeat certain patterns with special charicteristics.like flowers. thus, there is no coherence between artic action.

finally, elephents are truly afraid of mice just because. as professor mentioned, they are unfamiliar in certain enviorment.


ohan Wolfgang Goethe: Man errs so long as he strives.
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