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The table shows that the main constitution of families living in povertyis family of couple with children, next is single person with no childrenfamily and sole parent family. The last is family of single aged person andaged couple’s family.
For couple with children, it’s a big problem to offer their education whichinclude tuition fee、accommodation fee and transport fee. This problem isalso shows in sole parent families. But sole parent families have no need tospend on marriage maintaining, so they have a lower level of proportion inpoverty.
In the other instance, families without children still have aconsiderable proportion of poverty families. Single family who have a higherlevel of proportion  is mainlyconstructed by newly graduated people, who don’t have a steadily income but a sustainedconsumption. In couple family , there comes a lower proportion cause stableincomes comes up to their expenditure.
As for the aged couple’s family and single aged person’s family, whodon’s have such a strong requirement for luxuries,who live a simple life, havea very low proportion in poverty household type. Besides there is a lot of welfarepolicy to maintain their living condition as well as some of their childrensupport materially. It’s easily to comprehend that this kind of family do notconcerning about poverty problems usually.
In conclusion, education issues、housing problems、transport problems are main sources of economic stress. Mostwith-children families face these problems which makes them suffering frompoverty. While in childless families who don’t have those problems run theylife easier.


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