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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.


It has been suggested that these are not enough waste to be recycled and the only way to increase recycling is governments' obligation to make a legal requirement. Although it is straightforward that people should be conscious of the issue, I strongly believe that government is the best character to make it regulated for recycling for several reasons.

First of all, principles of the cycling may vary in different areas that government can make it integrated into the complete system without controversies. If there are many rules made, it might cause the citizen to confused about recycling that may decrease not enough of the waste recycled. For example, some may think the plastic bottles should be disposed because they are covered by mud and dirt while the other considered they can be recycled after cleaning. Therefore, throughout the regulation, it can change people in recognizing which type of waste should be recycled, resulting in an increase to recycling.

Secondly, the government should make it legal to fine when people scatter and put recyclables into trash cans. It might increase recycling because no one would give extra money, which they work for, to the government. Further, fine would raise the consciousness of recycling that the citizen may increase the willingness to recycle more waste. As the result, by making laws, it could be obviously effective in recycling more waste.

In conclusion, by making the integrated rules and fine in recycling, governments make it easier and efficient to increase more waste recycled.


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发表于 2018-2-15 05:28 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2018-2-16 23:58 |显示全部楼层
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