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发表于 2018-2-11 12:00 |显示全部楼层
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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish.There should be no government restrictions on what they do.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.


You should have heard such news that a noticeable artist became blocked in that his/her comments or actions didn't follow the goverment's wills.I am critical to this trick because I don't think the government has right to limit actors form expressing their own ideas in whichever way they wish.
The government's wills given socialpolitical needs are always limited by governers and only prone to one side which causes a plunging decrease in humen's creativity.
Arts should not be limited by restricked views because they only spark in freedom.That is to say,if artists are unlimited to express their ideas,their talents will be fully explored.So,in this condition,they can do remarkable commitment to art.For instance,thinks to his free soul,Picasso's paintings and ideas spread all over the world.
What's more,Free expressions entail argues between artists leading to a positive competetion in which artists can grow up in a health way.It really do good to their quality.
When artists get more languages in public views,a multicaltural world bulit by artists will be put in front of people's eyes.Concequently,the public's mind is going to broader and broader which helps benefiting their personal characters.Without free expressions,violence beauty widely used in  the movie,Kill Bill,won't be known by the public.
From what have discussed above,I stick to my opinion that there should be no government restrictions on what artisits do.Just let arts be in freedom and ideas fly.



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发表于 2018-2-14 14:42 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2018-2-14 16:37 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2018-2-20 20:16 |显示全部楼层
Thanks a lot.I will amend it.
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