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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.


People still have mixed view about whether offering the more sports facilities is the best way to solve today's public health problems. I will discuss both opinions in both side.

Some people believe that increasing the build of public sports facilities can improving their health. Those people think the public sports health contribute main effect for people's body when they can see these facilities in anywhere. Therefore, the plenty of sports facilities attract people yearnings of their heart and awaken the sense of healthy. Further, it may be easily for people to find place to work out if there are kinds of sports facilities choose. It would be reasonable that increasing the number of sports facilities can improve the public health.

However, many other people are opposed to this view. They think that there are many other methods can help people increases health and sports facilities not the best choice. For example, the government should attach importance to cultivating student's healthy attainments since primary school. As a matter of fact, in most of school the physical education class are negligent which are often replaced by English or math classes. And for most family, the parents usually hope children choose music or painting as hobby rather than sports. Specifically, the position of sports, even healthy, would decline in unconsciously and they may know the importance of health until sickish old period.



My view is that the addition of sports facilities is actually essential to improve public health. However, there also another measures can be considered. The basic health sense of people is more needed to change which do not let people realise the healthy importance too late.


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