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Questions: educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because children may spend so much time on cell phone, online games and social networking site.
Educating plays an international role in society no matter nowadays or in the past. Some people may argue that educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past since children may spend so much time on cell phone, online games and social networking site. However, I believe the education, because of the items listed just now, become easier rather than more difficult than before.

First of all, modern items such as cell phone, in deed, make it easier for parents to educate their children.
That is to say, using items such as mobile phone, parents can educate their children easier because they can have a tool to rely on when educating their children. For instance, while teaching basic pronouncation of English words, people nowadys can download some apps that can speel English words clearly rather than having to set an example themselves like what they do in the past. Therefore, educating children become easier because of items such as cell phone instead of being harder.

Secondly, it is online games and social networking Web site that make children have the chance to learn to know how to communicate with others themselves so that their parents may not need to teach their child
ren how to communicate with others any more, which, in deed, used to be a big part for parents in the past. For example, I spent lots of time playing online games and sufering social networking web site when I was  a child. After chatting with others at the social networking website and organized teams when it is required in online games, I have grasp basic skills of dealing with different people and realize the importance of thinking of other people"s emotion before taking action without my parent"s education. However, parents in the past must spend time teaching their children about the importance of thinking of others when taking action as well as skills of dealing with different people if their children donot have something to give them the experience that they can learn from. In a nut shell, online games and social networking site provide children a chance to learn lots of things which reduce their parents' pressure.

Admittedly, some items like cell phone may have bad influence on children's education. Take cell phone as an example, children sometimes may spend so much time playing the games in their cellphone rather than studying hard. Nonetheless, I believe the benefits brought by something such as cell phone still outweigh their drawback. After all, the items such as mobile phone help parents educate their children lots of things and can help children deal with other
people.

All in all, from what has been discussed above, I strongly believe that educating children is easier than before rather than harder because of cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site

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