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Question:Question: Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.  The reading passage shows three methods to protect birds from harming by the glass while the lecture rejects them all.
  Firstly, the reading passage points out that the one-way glass could make birds considers the glass as a barrier and avoid flying through it. However the lecture argues outside of the glass reflect things like a mirror which is as bad as the regular glass because birds do not understand mirror and they will fly to the glass.
  Secondly, the reading passage mentions colorful designs on the window glass could be applied to make birds notice the colorful signals so it could prevent birds from hitting to the glass. But the lecture disagrees with it because without painting the opening areas  would be thought as open holes by birds. They still fly to the opening areas. If the opening areas are small enough to stop birds passing through, it will be too dark for human.
  Finally, the reading passage claims man-made electromagnets could redirect birds from passing the building. In contrast the lecture refutes it because birds only use Earth\\\'s magnetic field as compass when they fly in a long distance. In a short distance, birds utilize eyes and brigntness of light to decide where to fly, which means magnetic signals would not stay birds away from the building.


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炸了,这是我托福小作文有史以来的最高分!!谢谢老师批改!
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