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Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made reading passage.


In the lecture, the professor is skeptical about the idea of the reading passage that work in a team may bring higher efficieny and make a greater achievement than the each individual in the team can do.
In the reading passage, one of the most improtant advantages is that the group members can share the experience and knowledge with each other so that  the group can work better and come up with some creative ideas to solve the problem. On the contrary, the professor says that the real situation may opposite the reading passage's point. The professor shown us an example of a team. In the real situation, some people in a team do not do anything.  In this way, the benefit of the people who make contirbution to the team will be decreased and it will influence their attitude toward the team so that the team may don't have a high work efficiency and any creative idea.
The professor then opposes the reading's idea that a group can work quickly. The professor states that there will be too many meetings and it is hard for members to make an consensus in a group in the real situation. In this way, the team can't work quickly.
Finally, the professor disproves the reading's idea that the idea of a member in a team is more likely to "shine". The professor points out that there some people who can influence others to follow him in the group. If these people ingnore an idea, this idea will be never fruther discussed. Then he gave us an example, in a team, the people who have the ability to influence others want to carry out an plan. Some other people think this plan will be faild, however, they don't have courage to opposite it. In the end, the plan was faild, and every one in the team should share the responsibility.


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