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Summarizethepointsmadeinthelecture,beingsuretoexplainhowtheycastdoubtonthespecificmethodsproposedinthereadingpassage.


In the lecture, the professor holds the different opinions against the author's perspectives regarding humpback whales' distinct ability to navigate by stars. The professor suggests that the evidences stated in the reading seems to be unconvincing.

First of all, according to the reading's passage, humpback whales are entitled to high intelligence which enables them to use stars for navigation. However, the professor contradicts the point of view and indicates that ducks are able to navigate through stars while their intelligence are in the average level.

Secondly, it is claimed by the author that humpback whales do not rely on external objects to use stars for navigation but other animals often navigates through the landmarks. On the other hand, the professor refutes the point and states that humpback whales have magnetic feeling to navigate themselves. For instance, they are very sensitive to the environment in order to successfully reach destination through the magnetic feeling.

Finally, the professor disagrees the behavior of humpback whales seeing the stars while their heads float above the water. The professor infers that sharks are also capable of spy-hopping while they don't migrate regularly and don't look at stars. Instead, sharks are hunting for food with the skill of spy-hopping. In addition, sharks use the skill during the day while stars can't even be seen.


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