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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>With the rapid development of society and technology, People in China nowadays are becoming more and more open and creative. Recently, many of them start a debeat above whether encouraging children to take a part-time job for preparing for the life in the future is the best opinion for their parents to help their teenagers. In my own case, I definately think that taking a part-time job benefits us a lot in many ways since it can help us enrich work and life experiences and increase our income, even jut a little bot . I will state several reasons for my opinion later in this essay.
Firstly, Taking a part-time job can help us understand much more knowledge that we can never learn at school,and experience some differnet situations that we won\\\'t meet at school. You will be consider as a adult or a professional workers by the consumers, your boss and colleagues during your working times. Nobody will take a special care of you a child. You are responsible to finish what you need to do well, or you will get subtraction of the salary or criticism from your boss. In this way, we can learn some rules and  in the adult world earlier than those students that did not take a part-time job. Let us take my sister as an example, she went to his father\\\'s restaurant to help the wariters clean dishes or pass the meals from kitchen to tables for the whole summer holiday. After she finished his holiday, she told me, even she didnt go out for traveling or rest, but she was still extremely satisfied with the awesome experience on the restaurant since she learned how to arrange the schedule the most properly and how to communicate with consumers efficiently and make them fell comfortable during her working time.
Another opinion about this topic is that,encouraging teenagers to have a part-time job can make children decrease the unrealistic comparsion among them. Since they will know how hard earning money is, then they will save money in daily life. Parents nowadays usually only get one child, that means a whole big famliy will take good care of him/her, this kid will grow up without worry about money. However, Let us assume that, if this person experiences how difficult to work, to make money for the whole family, will he/she change his/her mind or view of money?
Although some people might think that taking a part- time job will waste teenagers\\\' time and disturb their study, But moreover they would improve their speaking-skill and strain capacity through this experience.
In summary, it is extremely benifical for parents to encourage their child to take a part-time job for its advantage on gaining extra knowledge, understanding the rules in adult world to prepare for the future life, also can help them build a right view about money and save money.


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