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 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.


  Regular exercises is significant for everyone's health, because it makes people more energetic and stronger. However, because of the stress and other exterior issues, most people doesn't seems to be pay more attention on exercises anymore.
  According to the graph, we can see that the 15-24 age group of people, men are doing more exercises than women in this group. However, for the people who's age is more than 24, women's regular physical activity is more than the physical activity of men. Especially, the age group of 35 - 44, it has  the biggest interval between the percentage of men and women. Even though the interval starts to become smaller, but the percentage of women doing regular exercises are still more than men's.
  Nevertheless, even though there's numerous of people doing exercises everyday, but the percentage seems there's still a lot of people don't doing regular physical activity. Even women, there's only 53.3% of female in 45 - 54 age group. We can assume that the stress or a person is still taking a huge part of their life, so maybe once if the person have less stress than before, there will be more people going to doing regular exercises.


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