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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.


With globalism, countries are facing intense competition worldwide. It is suggested that many governments reckon the economic progress is the most important goal to achieve. Although there are reasons why governments put emphasis on this issue, I believe there are many other types of progress needed to be equally dealt with.

One of the most important reasons that government consider economic process is vital is that when the nation is prosperous, there are more budgets to achieve better welfare. Public schools in Japan, for example, need subsidies to support the lunch for poor students while special tuitions are provided for those who achieve lower scores. Because of this system, students in Japan have little difficulties getting a proper education, resulting in the average higher level of knowledge and providing more professionals to serve the whole society. With more people serving the nation,
the higher economic achievement could be made, causing a virtuous cycle between welfare and economic progress.

However, there are many other types of progress need to be considered important. For example, from the tax fairness perspective, the gap between the rich and poor exacerbates in Taiwan and the government needs to modify the laws to achieve fairness among inhabitants. Rich people need be taxed at higher tax rate and the poor, in contrast, may have tax exemption that helps them to acquire higher standard of living. Moreover, from the welfare perspective, superannuation system in Taiwan is facing insolvency that in the future, people may have difficulties living without salary after they retire. As a result, these issue mentioned are also imperative and urgent.

In conclusion, while economic progress is vital, which it provides a virtuous cycle that benefit the whole society, there are many other issues such as tax fairness and superannuation issues should be considered equal significance for a country.


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