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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.


Nowadays, cultural simulation prevails in the world. Some people contribute this phenomenon to the global commercial industry. Personally, I don't deem that purchasing goods globally will lead to a negative effects on global simulation. In contrast, it will help to enrich the diversity of culture and to decrease regional tentions.
Although buying commodity from other country will result in the cultural simulation, domestic government and community can compensate the effect by using some methods yet. For example, if the quality of exotic products is beyond the locals, people are more likely to buy high-quality products. At that time, government can provide enough supports to help the domestic workers to modify their products and improve the quality. In addition, community and social media can also have some public announcements to increase the awareness of public on purchasing their domestic products.
Besides the products itself, this behavior can enrich the variety of culture and decrease the regional tensions. For example, foreigners prefer to buy the goods that are not available in their goods market. By buying this kind of products, foreigners can know the cultural difference between their own and others, and local people can benefit from selling their own manufactures as well. To some extent, this attempt protects the cultural heritage from extinction. Furthermore, the more contact with outside world, the more bearable people are when encounter the cultural shock, the less misunderstandings will be generated. Thus, the conflicts generated from misunderstanding will be replaced by fully comprehension.
In conclusion, purchasing things from the world will not lead severe simulation between countries; on the contrary, it is a vital factor to help maintaining diversity of culture and diminishing conflicts.



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