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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>On modern society, people have more opportunities to travel than before. Among many choices of travel, engaging in group is a conceivable one since it is very cheap and convenient. However, that does not mean it is the best way. As far as I am concerned, travel alone could be very rewarding.

Admittedly, some people may save a lot of money when they travel with other people. They also are able to assimilate new knowledge in different aspects from their tour guides. However, not many people can have that pleasant experience, especially in my city, for instance. When summer begins, my city is crowed with people for travel, since the number of travelers in a group is so impressive, each tourists cannot receive a satisfied travel. Tour guides cannot answer the questions from numerable tourists one by one. Most seriously, the tour leaders are fail to consider the decisions from different people. Some may want to go the beach for swimming, while others would like to climb the mountain. This diverge will undoubtedly cause a negative effect on people\\\' s travel experience.

However, travel alone could be more attractive for tourists, as it allows travelers to improve their communication skill. For example, When I travel alone to a distant city, I had to contact with different people from different vocations, such as those people who worked in airport, hotel and so on. In addition, I endeavored to speak with native people and made friends with them. In this case, my speaking and communication skill could be strengthen extremely. And that is very beneficial for me to deal with the interpersonal relationship issues in future.

Equally, tourists could evoke their inner worlds if they travel alone. It is undeniably that people are under the unprecedented pressures. Therefore, many people travel to release their stress and negative feelings. There is no denying that travel alone is a efficient way to accomplish it. We can see many evidences around the world. For example, an American people, who was suffered from the depression, found the meaning of his life by traveling around. Because he was able to be stay in a quiet and isolated natural environment and thought profoundly about himself even the world. After a deep breathe and meditation, a focus of mind could be achieved  From this case, only via travel alone can people to find themselves and defeat the mental hazards.

In conclusion, travel alone could be more beneficial for travelers in some ways and cases. From a certain angle, it enables tourists to improve their capability concerned with speaking, and inspires people to enrich their inner world and release their pressures.


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