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Question:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.With the rapid development these days, there are people complaining about there lives and people earning a lot of happiness. I think I am the one who gain happiness through the modernization.

I would like to start with electronic devices. Nowadays, electronic devices like smart phones and laptops are necessities for almost everyone. Without the phone and internet, we feel like isolated from the society. We also gain happiness and benefits from these electronic items. For example, thirty years ago, if you missed someone who left your city or town for living, you had only one way that was to write a letter. You needed to wait for long time until the one you missed received the letter and gave you reply. However, it took lots of time as well. You might not even remember that you had sent a letter when you received the reply.  In contrast, the only things we need nowadays are two wifi-connected phone and an installed communicating app on both phone, such as facetime or what\\\'s app. You can either text to your friends and receive the answer immediately, or just call her. What\\\'s more, you can have a video call and see him/her right in front of you, in the little screen. Isn\\\'t that fun?

Secondly, rapid changing society means more opportunities. There are a lot of new things need to be created. Therefore, if you can find the trend of a new technology, you can earn a lot of money and reputation. Unlike the old livestyles which the family you were born defined what level you were in. Every one shares the same chance in the new world. With the confidence and knowledge on certain field, you can define your own life and follow your dream. Chasing my dream is an important composition of my happiness.

In addition, travelling is also one of the reasons makes me happy. In ancient time, travelling was really inconvenient due to the poor transportations and the locating methods. You did not know your desitination before you departed. Recently, you can make a detailed schedule before you go. You can book a ticket and hotel rooms online, search for tourist attractions and use Google Map when you are lost. Everything is so convenient that I think travelling in the new society is really a happy thing.

To put everything in a shell, the creation of electronic devices, great opportunities and the convenience of travelling makes me really happy.


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