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Question:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. The devolepment of science and technology has come to pervade every aspect of our lives, expecially the influence from the internet, which is changing people\\\'s life in a quite unprecedented speed, and as a result, some people consider goverment should spend money to improve internet access. In my perspective, I can\\\'t agree more for fllowing reasons.
First of all, the internet access could make more profits than the public tansportation. Therefore, it can make more contributions to the society. According to the survey conducted by the economic department, in recent years, The companies ranking 100 are almostly related to the internet and the GDP which the internet companies contribute to also exceeds the percent of fifty. Consequently, the increasingly number of internet companies also play  s vital role in economy in society. For example, Mayun, who is the CEO of the company named Alibaba, now is the richest people in china. His business depend on the development of internet. Without the prosperity of the internet, he couldn\\\'t build such a big company and created so much job oppotunities. The similar examples also have a lot, Amzon, Tencent, Facebook and so on. When it comes to the public transportantion, it will not as sucessfull as internet access.
Adside from the economy factors, the convenience should be taken consideration. Most people would claim that investing public transportation should more benefit the people, especially in convenience. However, that should be challenged.Improving public transportation is only convenient to travel to some place. The internet is able to do more. Nowadays, there are lots of apps appearing, which bring so much convenience for us. For instance, we could call for a texi by using the app named DiDi whenever we want, which also provide us with convenience in traveling somewhere. Apparently, more than applying this situation, the internet enable us to communicate with each other face to face, buy some commidities on the internet and searching for useful information and so on. It is actually that the internet will impove the people\\\'s living standard.
While it is true that the argument that government should first invest public transportation hold a little bit of water, I still think that the internet access is more important and should be improved  prior to the public transpotation.



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