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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>It seems that everything is going fast nowaday , the car on the road and the update of information and so on . In this period of information exploding , I strongly agree with this statement . I think this for two reasons , which I will explore in the following essay .
First of all , there are more information that people have to gain then before . Nowadays , people have to learn more , bacause knowledge and information are found by people easier than before . High quantity of information for people will add lots of pressure for their mind .  That will also make student have more stress and they will not have time to have fun . For example , as a student , I always chat with my father . One time , we were talking about a math problem that was about triangle . He felt amazing , because I was only a primarily student in that time . He told that he already was a junior high school student when he learned that . He and his friend just played game and have fun when they were as same as my age . High tichnology today not only add presure of mental for people and it also add the stress for their body .
Secondly , the environment is worse and worse today . There are more than million of people move in or out a city and there also have more than million of car drive on the road at one day . The city become more dirty than before and the plant of land is decreaseing from the past . Because of population , the dewlling become more density . Those problem make people who live in city feeling repression and unhappy . For instance , I live in Beijing since I was bron . The weather of Beijing become worse and worse , even we have to wear a mask going putside everyday . Bad weather make me feeling repression and there also are a lot of trafic jam in every anvenue . I feel noise and repression everyday , I am unhappy everyday .
In conclusion , I strongly agree with this statement . The conditions nowadys add a large amount of presure on people\\\'s mental and physical . Our living condition is worse than before . So we have to stop this tendency and do some things that good for our living condition . In that way , we can make our life be happy again rather let our descendant suffer in this circulation .


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