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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>Successful people try new things and take risks rather than doing what they already know how to do well.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>Undoubtedly, everyone in the society wants to success in the field they dedicated in, scientists want to have breakthrough in their study, business man want to earn more money, doctors want to save more lives. But how can we really achieve the success we want? Taking risks and try new things are rather beneficial for us to accomplish our objectives when the following reasons are taken into consideration.

     To start off with, challenging new tasks will enhance our abilities greatly. Not surprisingly, one\\\'s talent can hardly be improved if he or she stay in a comfort zone and focus solely on the familiar subjects. On the contrary, steps out a familiar area means that we have to make progression in a differing field, putting stress or motivation for us to consecutively augments our ablility. For instance, biological scientists could not discover anything significant if they only engross in one single aspects because an active organism is too complicated to be deciphered from a sole perspective.

     Moreover, attempting to conduct variant things could bring tremendous benefits for us even if sometimes it may be quite risky. Devoting in a new field provide a person with more opportunities to explore their potential which in turn make them more successful. Jack Ma, a case in point, is the founder of Alibaba, one of the biggest company in China, who opened up the online shopping market of China. He used to be an English teacher, but he was not satisfied with his situation. At that time he found the huge potential of Chinese online shopping market, hence he quitted his job so as to cieze the unprecedented chance. Obviously, he made an incredible accomplishment and became one of the richest person in China. Therefore, trying new things can explore one\\\'s possibility and people may have greater advancement in another field.

      All in all, in view of the outcomes of enhanced capability and border possibility that trying new things may lead to, I can draw the conclusion that people materialize their success via doing so.


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