小站论坛_托福论坛

[Riel~Riel老师已改] TPO50独立写作,求老师批改,谢谢

89
3

Rank: 6Rank: 6

排名500+

小站金币
15
发表于 2018-4-14 17:21 |显示全部楼层
5小站金币
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.






it is truth universally acknowledged that history class are need to add into student’s compulsory class. But I think all university should not be requested to study history class.
On the one hand, forcing student to study history may lead them to have more pressure that come from extra assignments of history class. It is notable that student have had much pressure in his fields now. And more and more pressure will lead student have bad health condition. If university add more class, it entails students facing more tasks or presentations that need to be done when the time is limited. For example, I have a high classmate name James. When he entered his university, he was told there were some changes compared to before. The music class became requested class for every student. he was very dismay because of deficient in music class. Subsequently he used more time to exercise in music instrument and enterprising to finish each of assignment, in order to get good grade. because of so much pressure, he always got sick and had a bad physical condition. It also leads him to fail in some of his class.
One the other hand, being requested to study history could waste some source of education. It is not a time-efficient or money- efficient. As we know, we need to do something we like or we have interest to do. If we are forced by others or university to study that we are not interesting. We cannot concentrate on the class, and we also cannot endeavor to study after class, because there is no power of interest to encourage us. So, it will waste some labor of teaching by professors who can do some project that student like. University can use the funds to other areas, such as rebuild dormitory or renovate the court.
Admittedly, we cannot negate the importance of learning history, but I think we need to consider this problem rationally instead of adding extra class directly. We can do some research or questionnaire among students.
In nutshell, we disagree a statement that history need to requested in all the university. Not only will it result in more pressure to students, but also, this method will waste time of professors and waste money of the education.

回复

使用道具 举报

Rank: 30Rank: 30Rank: 30Rank: 30

该用户从未签到

排名500+

小站金币
133
发表于 2018-4-17 16:44 |显示全部楼层
This essay is being evaluated.
回复

使用道具 举报

Rank: 30Rank: 30Rank: 30Rank: 30

该用户从未签到

排名500+

小站金币
133
发表于 2018-4-17 17:43 |显示全部楼层
SATapp下载
游客,如果您要查看本帖隐藏内容请回复
回复

使用道具 举报

Rank: 2Rank: 2

排名500+

小站金币
16
发表于 2018-4-17 20:43 |显示全部楼层
一般没有 are need to 这种用法把。。。改成need to be added 会比较好
回复

使用道具 举报

领取福利

我们将以您绑定的 (****)
作为接收批改短信的默认手机号码

订阅小站最新精品课程信息

领取福利

输入您的手机号码,批改动态随时掌握!

订阅小站最新精品课程信息

您可以在设置—密码安全—绑定手机中随时修改您的手机号码

领取福利

还差最后一步了!只要填写完邮箱即可同时获得批改短信提醒小站精品课程信息两大福利了!

领取福利
快捷菜单

  Copyright 2011-2018 小站论坛,All Rights Reserved 小站教育   沪ICP备15003744号-3   网站地图   最新帖子 联系我们 | 站点统计 | 版权声明 | 免责及隐私声明

订阅最新机经

选择托福机经及考试日期进行预约,预约后机经将在考试前3-5天左右通过邮件和短信形式推送

热门机经*
考试日期*
立即订阅