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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>As a respectful profession in the human society, teachers play an indispensable role in helping students to become educated and capable. When it comes to Whether or not teachers are more valuable than before, most people agree that people\\\'s role in society is of greater importance. However as far as I am concerned, such statement is untenable. In many aspects, teachers are less cherished than before.

To begin with, thanks to the increasing development of technology, individuals have more choices and methods to receive education. In this case, the role of teachers is not that obliged. We can see many students learn on their own. They are capable of assimilate their devoting and interesting knowledge and concepts through the internet. Also, students could read numerable relevant books to get higher makers on the finial exams. Therefore, the influence of teachers on student is somehow negligible. On the contrary, in the past, the situation is totally different. Since the poor condition of education and living standards. there was a small possibility that students could study on their own. They were not capable of surfing the internet to resolve their puzzles in the study. Furthermore, most of them previously cannot pay enough money to purchase a book, which gave rise to a consequence, that is, depend on their teachers to become a more intelligent and illustrious people. Accordingly, more students in the past regarded teachers as a cherishing people.

In addition, to students on the modern time, they are more rebellious and unwilling to study in school, which means teachers are far from respectful to them. Such phenomenon is result from the ruthless and relentless pressures from real lives. Especially in China, most of the students have to study continually without a relaxation so as to be enrolled in a better university. However, students may think their lives are extremely boring and meaningless. Eventually, most of them could get mental hazards. To those students who suffered from this problems, teachers are to blame. Therefore, it is less likely for them to appreciate and respect the teachers. By contrast, in the past, students are less likely to face such challenge. Most of them suffered from physical troubles rather than mental ones. Thus, to a psychology angle, the student may unlikely to hate or revolt teachers.

To sum up, I reiterate my standpoint that to some extent, teachers are less treasured than before, as students now depend on teachers less and become more insurgent.


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