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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>The societies have undergone radical changes in the past several years. Under this circumstance, education always play a pivotal role in the society not only relate to the national development but also the country\\\'s prosperity. From my perspective, the modern and various technology such as phones and video games have make educating children more difficult.

First, these attractive things could distract children. Since children nowadays are exposed to diverse entertainment, from fancy technology to online pornography, these exterior stuffs assuredly impede the progress of education. For example, students could spend large quantities of time indulge in online games or using cell phones. On the view of addiction, students tend to have less time on studying and are rendered less concentration. As a result, the education of children become more intractable since students’ mind occupied by other various temptations.

Moreover, the teaching process could be more complicated due to the sophisticated technologies. To be more specific, there are various channels available for children to obtain information. It is conceivably that the explosive information may have the chance to directly contradict the opinions hold by the teachers. As a result, children could be confused and do not know which one is authentic. Even worse, children\\\'s notion could be distorted by the information from the Internet, such as radical comments, political opinions involving discrimination between races, etc. Therefore, it will be extremely difficult to keep children on the right course when they are already contaminated by plausible and deceptive statements.

There is no denying that the advanced technologies facilitate people\\\'s normal life and make it more convenient to contact each other compared to the past. For instance, people could easily chart online with the help of Internet and search for useful information by simply clicking the mouse. However, the advantages are eclipsed by the downsides I have mentioned in the term of children\\\'s education.

In conclusion, the various modern technologies could exert huge trouble on educating the next generation. In the view of over indulgence and high percent of time occupation, cell phones and other digital devices could definitely impede the process of imparting knowledge.





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