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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>
It is an universal truth that friends play an indispensable role in our lives. When it comes to new friends and old friends, people\\\' opinion differs from person to person, and culture to culture. However, as far as I am concerned, old friends are more important in many aspects.

Admittedly, people could, to some extent, assimilate new information and knowledge from new friends. As we can see some people have to meet enormous people every day during the work days. In this case, they may contact with people from different countries, languages, cultures and so on. It is not surprise that these people could make a lot of new friends. And most importantly, these new friends could provide numerable benefits to individuals. They can learn from these new friends. For instance, many Chinese like to make new friends who are capable of speaking English, which is a effective method for them to improve comprehensive English skill. Also, they are able to experience something new which they are unable to experience before, which will widen their horizon.

However, not many people have the capability to make new friends, they may face some troubles like the gap between cultures or lacking self-confidence. On the contrary, keeping old friends could be very convenient and easy. Since people familiar with old friends, there is a high possibility that keeping old friends could allow people to feel more comfortable so as to acquire a lot. There is no denying that the moments with old friends are extremely cherishing and valuable. All of this could be treasured as memory. Furthermore, people are willing to talk anything even some privacy with old friends rather than new friends. Consequently, keeping old friends is a more reachable way to enjoy the friendship.

In addition, old friends could play the role of pilot that guide people psychologically and mentally. Undoubtedly, on modern time, people are facing ruthless and relentless pressures from real world. Consequently, people need old friends to give them mental support. It is very embarrassed and weird that people tell their personal and emotional stuff to their new friends. By contrast, old friends could , in most cases, achieve it. As old friends understand people\\\' s feelings, characteristics, weakness, merits and so forth, they are able to provide relieving cure to them. Accordingly, the people who suffered from mental problem could be lightened and improve their mentality.

To sum up, I reiterate my standpoint that keeping old friends is of more importance. Since people are in the better position to keep old friends and more likely to get relieved from their old friends.


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