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Those who consider convenience and noveltythe yardstick of the living standard might say that the lives we live today arebetter than in the past since our world is changing every single day. However,I think, when it comes to easiness and comfort, the life of the past is happierand more satisfied than the modern people's life.
    Firstly, as far as the pressure people facetoday is concerned, it is less desirable to live the life nowadays. These days,many people are stressed out due to the heavy burden of having to study andwork hard along with competition among peers in this rapidly changing society.Being successful is everyone's life goal, but compared to the past, thestandard of success is refreshed constantly, so we not only have to take fulleffort to go forward, but only have lots of anxieties of catching up withothers and not to be chased. We have to run faster and faster can we strugglingto stay in our tracks in this modern world changes from day to day, otherwisewe may fall behind and turn into a loser. Life is not easy now.
    Moreover, human relationship is gettingmore complex due to the rapidly developing society. As you may know, thestories in the books and movies in the past, people can be simply divided intwo groups, bad people and good ones. As the time goes by, however, friends canbecome enemies, and enemies can become one of our co-workers. We have ever-more-intricaterelationships with a number of people. In addition, while people wereresponsible only for themselves or their family in the past time, many peopletoday have to take more responsibilities like as a member of communities, amanager who have subordinates or a president of a club. Maintaining all therelationship well is much tougher.
    Finally, the current social structure alongthe changing world makes our present life more difficult to live. Most of usdid farming in the past, the only thing we had to do was to reap what we sow,and that was it. However, due to the fast changing over years, jobs are gettingmore specialized now, it is not when we become grownups, but when we arechildren that we have to set our goals and be educated according to them. An Indianmovie named Hindi Medium recently exposed the phenomenon, many parents wanttheir kids start to have top education resources even from the time they arepregnant! We get a ever-longer lasting education just to fit in our ever-fasterchanging social structure. How can we have time to enjoy life and be happy aspeople did in the past?
    In conclusion, I agree with the statementthat life is harder and less contentment compared to the past due to the highspeed changing of our society.

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