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Question:Question: Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.The reading passage proposes three benefits of electronic medical record system. The lecture, however, rebuts all the assertions respectively by using three specific points.

To start with, the reading passage holds that electronic records can assist in costs reduction. The lecture contradicts its certainty. Since doctors do not throw away their paper records and keep paper records as backups, they still need storage space to keep paper records, which will do nothing with cost saving.

Moving on, the reading passgae states that electronic medical records can help avoid medical errors. The lecture argues that this method can not eliminate errors. Since doctors use pens to take notes when they examine patients, the members may input and interperte original stuff into computers, which may result in medical errors.

Lastly, the reading passage asserts that electronic medical records can aid medical research by making it possible to gather large amounts of data from patient records. The lecture explains that it is difficult to use medical information of patients. In addition, the access to private medical records is subjected to privacy law. In the U.S., researchers must follow strict and complex procedures to get permission to go through patients\\\' records. Also, patients are entitled to keep their medical information and reject others to use it. All in all, according to the lecture, what is mentioned in the reading passage is unconvincing.


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